Open Poetry #31 |
rankled orbs |
steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
rankled orbs of star-lit night fording streams with bearings bright sail across a canopy of sea-like hangings ever nautical, ever nocturnal, fluid tributary, luminary of lucid dreams and hopes’ exchangings waiting tables of mist-bathed lovers slings of cupid’s phalanx hovers casting spells, spelling changings fording streams with bearings bright cross these orbs of star-lit night |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Interesting images conjured Steaven.....Very creative. Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great imagery |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wonderful view TD |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
I had to look up a number of words-- but it was well worth it. Great write! |
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