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Love's Enduring Existence
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Love's Enduring Existence |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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Being feminine, sophisticated, deep inside my mind you're the real beyond my whims the blessing of my seasoned time. Yet every time you're gone, not very often, you call faithfully, your familiar voice stirs my captured feelings. You sound lonely, insecure, coaxing me to speak words of meaning that bridge our hearts together. I assure you, without ever having to say so, though I do! my love for you will never die. I hear you laugh at my boyishness. I laugh at myself, because I've never been able to control how I still act treasuring those tender moments, escaping back to innocence to that place in our love, where recognition of our faithful need for each other is our existence! copyrighteltrue@E3B1G9/2001/Roach&Morris Inc. Ain't doin nothin at all |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
There is such a joy of "easy" friendship and love to this--you've described a bonding of the soul most beautifully Eric. Loved this.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
hear you laugh at my boyishness. I laugh at myself, because I've never been able to control how I still act treasuring those tender moments, escaping back to innocence to that place in our love, where recognition of our faithful need for each other is our existence! True tenderness captured beautifully. Love, Margherita |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I felt a very relaxed and comfortable love herein. Very much enjoyed Eric. ~Smiles & Hugs m'friend~ ~Before befriending butterflies |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There's a captivating innocence in your boyishness... and it's refreshing... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...one of my favorites...James |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Casual but committed to each other. believe in what your heart feels... |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"I hear you laugh at my boyishness. I laugh at myself, because I've never been able to control how I still act" i think the sound of laughter is sweeter than music, love should be about laughter, very nice |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
escaping back to innocence to that place in our love, where recognition of our faithful need for each other is our existence! This is such a lovely write. Enjoyed. Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Eric, You always bring the best to the top. Especially liked all of this. TD |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Celeste, thanks for the read and the nice response. Margherita, thanks for seeing the tenderness in this piece and for taking the time to mention it. Enchantress, I truly do thank you for such an insightful comment because that was the purpose of this write. Karilea, you know me, just a boy at heart. Thanks muchly! James, thank you so much for taking the time to read this. scorpio I appreciate the comment very much. Muted, you're so right laughter is a great catalyst. Thanks. Nightshade, thank you for the quote and the comment. TD thanks so much for the kind words. I try to bring those endearing things to the top as much as I can.....Wish I was better at it but will continue to work at expressing. Thanks so much. Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are one of my favorites! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well, I gotta tell ya, you're one of my favorites too......So there you go it's mutual. Eric |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hello ethome. Love the title...loved the words. Very pleased to see you are from Canada too. I am from Ontario. Been in the States for 5 years now...but I still call The North home. Wonderful poem. Glad I popped in to read it. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Way to go, Eric! This poem is incredible for the message it conveys. I hope she keeps a copy on her desk, in her purse, and in her suitcase. These are words she'll always love. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric The tenderness of this touches me.  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hello verse 2 great to hear from you....Ontario is a great province. I lived in Haliburton/Minden area for a year and married a girl from there. Thanks for the kind words. Hi LJ I appreciate the comments glad you could drop in. I hope they are words that will stay with her. Thank you Martie my dear sweet flower girl friend I appreciate the kind thoughts.... Eric |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Absolutely beautiful, Eric. Take care....Sue I am in motion |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sue You're very kind and I appreciate the comments so much. Eric |
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