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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2004-03-30 10:14 AM


And so, by rivers side, peepers are snapping fingers
To a band playing “Dance to the Music”!
Muddled by a shelter of extremists for animal-rights
Diverse, communiqué draws mystical foresight
Morning’s orange glow burns off opinions of night

And I realize the reason for roadies, they’re convictions &
love for the boulevard & music!

It is an inner flesh of revolutionary, in unspoken tongue
So common in the brew of mainstream golden corn
Philosophical images determines another seepage
Like the ploy of child-rearing voices being born

For even the smallest of improvements
Reinforced by an invisible spiritual embrace
Struggling moral implications of livelihood
Nature sooths an uncanny but necessary face

Sometimes way to frivolous, to assume new directions
Age old echoes, type precise, hard-won poems
Owning a good deal of frothy opinions by election
From the career of yesterday’s, well-known songs

Couple’s now, this sum of trumpeted fusion
Rejoining the unrivaled superman of worthy prose
Oh how the sky climbs to a forever uncertainty
Indigenous liberal core, yet most intimate home

And so enabling long-haired talent
Perfecting rings in monumental forum
Shakespearian response
A symmetry exhibitionist of designed hocus-pocus

Dangling in mid air, urging waters pigment
Into a deep-rooted relationship to quote
A most persuasive love affair & promise of elopement
Swallowing fears…as a brave determination would boast

Save the hands of winds, dreaming an ivory column
Intoxicating library of powers being alive
Far above the din of hardnosed opinionated wisdom
Reminiscent of laughter, watercolors fuse a high-five

Abolishing wicked motives from a former day…lost and forgotten
Into a mark of perfected reflections so admirably displayed
Affection owns this characteristic…permissively blatant
Succulent ferocity of loyal topics
Nature resizes two morning windows complete
Side by side, now one soul defies a natural law of physics

Is that Nature's "Sense and Sensibility"? Yuppers, I do believe I'll think so!
Smiles and hugs


© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-03-30 10:16 AM


LeeJ, thank you I NEEDED to read this today.  thank you....
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2004-03-30 12:01 PM


LeeJ
PURE PROFUNDITY. GOOD MORNING

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
3 posted 2004-03-30 01:28 PM


A very good one, Lee... but then, all yours are good ones!
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
4 posted 2004-04-01 12:30 PM


Big smile to you too Lee J.  I was smiling while reading this.  Such a happy write and filled with joy and plain-ol-joy!  Love this one Lee J.

JL

JL

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2004-04-01 02:49 PM


I will be thinking about this one all day at work today/tonight

thanks Lee

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-04-01 03:19 PM


Yes!!  Very much enjoyed this one Lee.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy Lee~

  ~Before befriending butterflies
you have to meet with midnight moths.~

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
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Ala bam a
7 posted 2004-04-01 03:25 PM


Hey, I really enjoyed this...very well done...
zippi
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since 2004-03-31
Posts 56
California
8 posted 2004-04-01 03:33 PM


Your pen drips beauty where ere it goes,
love this one Lee J
Rene`

INclan
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Indiana, USA
9 posted 2004-04-01 04:03 PM


I enjoyed
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