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Country Road
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Country Road |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought 
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A repost because... I can. Err, because of too many lone walks in the rain. In traveling this country road You’ll find the people here alone. Though stars alight the velvet sky, Smiles fade unknown. The moon exists to wane away, And friends aren’t on this barren land. The people cry alone at night, And no one offers out their hand. The trees here stand so proud and tall, The wind swirls steady with the rain, But traveling this country road You’ll find a people, filled with pain. He was a man of sorrows |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wish I could walk with you, but you are in my heart |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hi GG. I like this. I like the rhyme scheme. Besides I live on a country road. LOL! In all honesty this is a great poem. Bravo. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Dix, You're in mine, too... EvocativeVerse2, Thank you! I take a few too many walks alone on cold nights. I think I scare the neighbors ( a very fun thing to do)  Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Alyssa, I love walking in the rain...you are not alone. Nice to put a face to a name also, love the cute picture! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Alyssa You words were so very sad. You, my friend, will never be alone. Although we may be far in distance our words keep us close at heart. For you :  Take care.........Sue I am in motion |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alyssa~ You could walk our country road any night~ I might just *HUG* ya' to pieces~ I ain't scaired a' no lil' angel girl~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
GG -- this almost sounds like it could be a song. I've missed reading you. I've been away a couple of weeks, looks like I've missed a lot! ........jo |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Hello GG, This is a wonderful poem. :-) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
took a walk tonight...in the fog...and felt you by my side |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it  |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Alyssa, You must be on the wrong country road; go to Ohio and turn left and go straight for about forty miles; there are lots of friendly country roads here waiting for just such a person! Glad to see one of your post again. I'dbeen wondering how you were doing. Take care, Cutie. Sadelite |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
gemjop, good, I figured this would be the place to find morewho liked walking in the rain thanks for your reply!Sue, you're always so thoughtful with what you say, thank you so much for that, you truly are beautiful Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Marge, sounds like a deal! I do have some interesting stories about people who've tried to follow and find me while I was on walks. But generally people can tell I'm not someone to mess with while on night walks. But if I like ya then I'm nothin but a teddy bear! thanks for your reply!jo, sure not missed much from me, I've been out, too! Missed reading everyone too, but I've just been out of time. So good to hear from you though, thank you for replying Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
froggy, thank you I'm glad you think so!Dix, I was there I always am... just like you're here. Thank you.Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
vandana, I'm glad you like it, thanks so much. Sadie, maybe so.. actually, my road isn't terribly countryish, not compared to other places. Actually I love my road, I just hate being alone. Sometime I'll have to find that road there in Ohio sounds nice! thanks for replying, it's always good to hear from you.Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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