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ChemicalRepose
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since 2004-03-28
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0 posted 2004-03-28 09:17 PM


I began to dig again today
Poked by pain
and gagged by apathy
I tried to rest
from the
gratified mocking  
of this test
and strengthen my enfeebled soul
Enduring no treacle
and persecute my vitality

I've bestowed everything
for this fear
Dreading everything
you took, you inferior
You lost your focus
now
Besieged by cynical forces
who captured my weakness

I know your only a
maggot
Trying like fire
to wake upon this
endeavor
Despairing hopes
concord by eager

Your desperate,
Surpassing fieriness
belligerently looking for me
searching for your
malevolence

You've come beside me
and I gulp down the product
that poisons me
and my blood flows with sympathy
not any more
See you can't hurt me
your just a little maggot
Beleaguered by maggots
feeding on your desperation

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1 posted 2004-03-28 11:12 PM


intense!!!!  
        


EagleScorpion
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2 posted 2004-03-29 04:18 PM


interesting. i may be able to relate with you here.

i've decided to disaccociate myself with maggots in favor of more noble and loyal creatures of the earth

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