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Reality's Waves
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Emergence. I, the observer, watch as resentments fall away, the shedding of tears, softly giving in and letting go with acceptance. “I know you care. I know it hurts. You said someday we’ll get through this.” The words flowed forth so quietly, touching me. The farewell leaves me dying, every time. But knowing our souls will touch forever, keeps me in the present Time. And I am not left alone. I’m with the One who knows and loves, strengthens and upholds. Waves of realization wash over me. I will love again. Despairing thoughts and torments have somehow blossomed into joy with another beautifully soft goodbye. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And such a beautifully soft goodbye this is. Lovely lovely write..very much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
don't you know I felt like this was meant for me  |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Thank you for your lovely comments, Nancy. Yes, Dixie, actually I did think of you! ~K~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As we discover the connections and limits, we soar in the arms of destiny. Wonderful write. TD |
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ChemicalRepose Member
since 2004-03-28
Posts 102 |
There is so much beauty in despair. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Kahlil -- heart hugs to you for finding what you found! I like the ending.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Loved this write, m'friend. You DO have wings, and they carry you aloft above the stormy seas, above the waves of daily strife to the realms of empowerment.  OK, enough of that, I enjoyed this soaring write, lady K. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
This is very good, Kahlil!  |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
if not for corazon then what for is poetry? and you have the heart of a poet. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Emergence. I, the observer, watch as resentments fall away, the shedding of tears, softly giving in and letting go with acceptance." ~ K, with the acceptance comes grace into our lives. This stanza was especially grace-full. Love & Light, EA |
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D'sWhisper Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 68Washington, USA |
This was...beautiful. Elegant in it's voice, lulling in rhythm and smoothly emotional in the waves of meaning. I mean, it's like that wonderfully accepting logical and reasoned out feeling that happens after the post <.....>. I love it. It feels like you touched it with love and a bit of serenity. |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
This is very beautiful.Loved it. Maggie |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Thank all of you so much for stopping by to read and comment. Yes, I have been led to a place of serenity. ~K~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
excellent feelings so honest and true, this was an amazing concept of just allowing things to be, instead of fighting for what we cannot have...hugs and blessings |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
What a beautiful poem. You have a warm, and gentle heart. JL |
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