Open Poetry #31 |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
TRENDS Below the thin grey line A blitzed orange array The flock of gulls decline Out from a blue and crystal way Where all fads and fashions Constantly come but never stay. Fire red: the horizon screams, mercy! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Great imagery here, Grover! ![]() |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Fabulous writing here Grover~ The horizon speaks for itself~ |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
"The flock of gulls decline Out from a blue and crystal way" -- very well said! a belated welcome to the forum. hope to see more of your work! ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Love the imagery in this piece. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Is that love I see in your eyes... |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Awwwwwwww! Oh my gosh, I love how you painted this beautiful scenery, sweet friend, hehehe, OK seagulls and pelicans, this adult swim session is over, time for the fireflies and owls! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, yay, I can't wait to read more wonderful poetry from you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Grover, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, splendid imagery....would be a peaceful scene on a cool summer's eve....as the orange slowly sets into the darkened night. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Grover, you painted a picture with your words. Just beautiful!! ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great thoughts! |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your imagery is captivating... and I'm a willing prisoner. *G* Excellent! *S* |
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KristieSue![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
this would be a fabulous painting! "Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~Leonardo da Vinci |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
lovely picture that you paint...and so fads set into the sunset ![]() |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Thank-you all for your kind words of encouragement! Grover. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
It already IS a painting.. ![]() Bless your cotten sockies, you poetic maniacs. ^_^ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Awesome! Awesome! |
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Snow![]()
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
ohhh bravo!!! nothing i could say would be enough. simply... bravo!! snow "...why does my skeleton pursue me |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!! Eric |
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