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Barren Grasp
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Barren Grasp |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving 
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 photograph titled "Barren Grasp" by~ Me |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
good write, with the picture,, the essence of mother nature and the lord working together.... enjoyed bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
muted A little bit of lovely. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my how beautiful Dawn! Looks just like fingers reaching up. Well done. Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a treasure as always |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
if you look between the branches you'll see a little white dot, its actually a star, i was very lucky to capture a few stars in the photo.. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
magical image here...in thought and word. TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Awesome and profound! Thanks, muted!  .......jo |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I see some boney fingers. Excellent! Maree Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Great photo and words, enjoyed, thank you. Sincerely Rick |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Dawn I must admit the picture seemed spooky to me when I first saw it...My first impression was that it was the reaper..(I read later that it was your hand, please don't take offence).sorry, I have to be honest...The reapers hand was gently moving the stars aside so that a soul might have a clear path to heaven.. with those thoughts as a base, I thought it well done...I guess I was way off base...Sheesh! it seems my imagination was way off course.. _________ice ><> |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ooooh I see the star now!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
LOL, ice! no no not my hand! LOL it's the branches of a "ghost gum" tree! LOL i guess maybe you cant see the pic as well as i can |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
beautiful , just awesome m ....... |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Wow!!! Dawn, what a beuatiful mix of image and words....Glad I had a chance to scroll back ...finally.  ~P |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
how stunning! Very much enjoyed |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Awesome... so mysterious, enchanting! |
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MovesInSilence Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 111Perth, Australia |
*fiddles with monitor colour settings* oooooo pretty nice use of photo and poem. (now i see why you put the camera in such a strange position) I think i count 2 stars being cradled by the hands |
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