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Kicking Kim
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Cloud Cucko Land!

0 posted 2004-03-27 08:02 AM


.:'^*-*^':.:'^*-*^':.
Here I lie
  in a meadow of dreams
   gently caressing
    the silken flowers.
     birds and butterflies
    fly by
   in this utopian daze.
  Like an absurd anachronism
   my digital watch begins to sound.
    I awake.
     .:'^*-*^':.:'^*-*^':.

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

© Copyright 2004 Kimberley Mason - All Rights Reserved
Sadelite
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1 posted 2004-03-27 08:49 AM


Ah, shucks.  I wasn't ready for this beautiful dream to end!
              ~SAdie~

Goldenrose
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2 posted 2004-03-27 08:53 AM


Kim..a very nice dreaming poem....almost part two to my poem..so i obviously know where you are coming from...

Well done..and thank you.

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

Goodknight
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3 posted 2004-03-27 11:51 AM


Well done Kimberley - loved the sense of this - dreams always seem to be interrupted by reality - Paul
passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-03-27 12:36 PM


I almost got lost in here

I suppose there is a time for everything *sigh*

passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-03-30 04:25 AM



EvocativeVerse2
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6 posted 2004-03-30 04:29 AM


LOVE THIS! Note to self...smash the watch!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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