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The Half-Light
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The Half-Light |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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The Half-Light I talk to the walls at night and to sleepy plants awakened by my fright If it were the day I would be wondered about at best or dismissed More likely the casual half-hearing assuming ears would add their own made-up story and finish my sentences To my feedback amusement I puzzle those eyes and wonder if I am just another poem to be remembered only by its first line © 012804 |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
one spark from a match will make the silence of the darkness break and the melody of a lullaby starts from a single sigh notes dance from wax by design a symphony started from it’s first line |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am just another poem to be remembered only by its first line ~*~ oops looks like I remembered the wrong lines.  |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
I used to talk to the plants well, until they started talking back... Your one heck of a writer Krawdad I really enjoyed this! Richy |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Krawdad In the night there are many things that listen. Loved the whimsy in this, and the touch of forlorn. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I liked the use of half-hearing in your poem. I think that must be among the biggest problems in the world today. If people only really listened, oh my! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) People just don't listen is the problem, they only hear what hey want to hear and that is the source of so much deception and sorrow in the world! (sad sigh) I wish stillness of heart for you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krawdad, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is awesome! just stunning! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
A very big subject....The poem's brevity adds greatly to its effect on the reader,,,good use of few words to cover the theme of the poem... enjoyed _______ice ><> |
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nn Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 75 |
I really loved to read it. Actually I've been feeling like throwing such a message lately. You did it in a wonderful way.  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done sir.. and like the thoughts it leaves..as well as the question indeed.. Enjoyed. |
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Kie Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 77USA |
A poem that expressed itself from deep inside of you. These are the best types to read in my opinion. I truly adored this one. |
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