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MexicoCityBlues
Junior Member

since 2004-01-04

Posts 48
The Point of Know Return

0 posted 2004-03-27 01:56 AM

Dream Hands.

Wake up, dead fool!
your dinner arrived
yesterday
with a smile
and tip of the hat
and adieu

Wake up, dead fool!
you’ve slept through the war
avoided these hoarded bullets
grotesque abominations
of love and
nothing

Wake up, dead fool!
you’ve fallen for false dreams
they’ve been moaning
on your doorstep
and
she’s been running . . .

Wake up, dead fool!
you’ve been torn
by the Dream Hands
of an angelic
beast.

Wake up, dead fool!
these shackles are worn
but still compress these
swollen extensions
of loves at arms’ length

Wake up, dead fool!
you’ve lost yourself in
this mirage of Monet
murals and mosaics
of colorful perceptions,
prerequisites of dark
masturbation—such an
abomination

Wake up, dead fool!
you’ve been stepped on
trampled by shooting stars
jogging dreams
dancing bears
what a freedom
to pick lights from the sky
behold in one dead hand
a lost dream
fate’s SHOUTING excrement
of such an abomination

Wake up, dead fool!
you’re been seeing the sun
but it’s only the moon on fire.
you must be confused, child
really? two?

Wake up, dead fool!
remember guitars?
its been years
she killed you.
that one left you.
this one deceived you.
she killed you.
its been years.
wake up . . .

"The story of life is quicker than the wink of an eye. The story of love is Hello and Goodbye. Until we meet again..." -Jimi Hendrix

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-03-27 02:27 AM

MCB -- I think we are on the same wave length tonight. Good write!

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

2 posted 2004-03-27 03:46 AM

~WOW~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-03-27 03:48 AM

intense!

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

4 posted 2004-03-27 08:38 PM

very intense make one think thanks

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2004-03-27 08:41 PM

A powerful write.
Did you slip this one
under his pillow?

Excellent writing!

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

6 posted 2004-03-27 10:37 PM

Grabs you and keeps you...

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