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Open Poetry #31

I Cried Again Today

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-03-27 12:20 PM

the winds blowing ice into my heart
i feel so cold.
i cried again today
like the world was ending
the tears still burn my eyes
my love for you is leaking out of me..
kiss me like you used to
so i can feel your soul.
i cried again today
just to know what it felt like to be alive...

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-03-27 12:33 PM

Oh, exhale, big hugs sent your way. Your tender, sad writing touched me.

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

2 posted 2004-03-27 12:41 PM

exhale, I really felt this. Great expression. ~K~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-03-27 03:43 AM

I do understand

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

4 posted 2004-03-27 04:18 AM

yes, very deeply touching

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

5 posted 2004-03-27 09:37 AM

We have all had these tears at one time or another. The tears that fall and the pain in your chest that makes you curl into a little ball of dispair.
Good poem, bad write.
Bon-Bon

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

6 posted 2004-03-27 10:00 AM

Sometimes the Wind of Change can be quite destructive ...

     ... but it has the best of intentions.

  Sorry for your tears but they have captured your essence.

                     A good sad write.

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