Open Poetry #31 |
Luna Dulce |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Furled of complicated endings tied together She rations into smaller bundles set adrift and blessed Dusk calls to the moon, like liquor in the blood Dampening the creases opulence releases Oval full spills down until the nectar ceases pouring clear Following the flows of luscious bows, and curvature Between soft hills once plains that drenched Falling off her shoulders cataracts of liquid light Into the wave dances all that sparkles, toe touch on glide The shimmer but a preview of the soul Her song, her song sung on the glitter of tides Soft as doe eyes looking back and lost among the sleekest slides Low, the moist to V along caresses slow and wandering That tingles into night, and all a rolling sprawl that turns her over and on And on into the dawn, she writhes and rises beneath the tarried fingertips of morn Copyright Kkh 3/26/04 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThisDiamond Elegant, enjoyed. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Excellent, enjoyed! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Luna, Dolce, Tres, quatro, cinco....that's all I know in spanish....pretty impressive hunh?.....I liked this... |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this has very luscious sensual images, a very rich dish here and i enjoyed every bite of it |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
TD You write words Floating on an idea Wondering Sharing the same software Pillowing hills of passion Waiting Interesting wandering With my blessing Dave Copyright Kkh 3/26/04 IP: Logged |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you keep the glow alive as it goes thru the metamorphasis from sky to sea, beautifully |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquisite Kathleen...simply exquisite. Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Lovely and flowing! ........jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice! |
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