Open Poetry #31 |
Like Eggs |
DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
We dance our minds across a sea of eggs Making a colour of yellow and white we always feel we know how and the audience waits Bringing their own plates To bang a spoon And a plate As we present an image That matters Too feed The life We care for In our emotions |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
...and if we have to put on such an "act" for others....we usually wind up with egg on our faces!! Enjoyed. Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I feel like a side-dish. I enjoyed this very much, Dave. Thank you. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
The colors make for a nice contrast... |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Blue it again It was a wish that the United Nations was not a political acheivement and that you could believe the European Union Was more than Both dancing with the Eagles while a sacrifice pays for a poltiician on re-appointment and those milking it Sorry Guys I care Dave |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Dave, with either interpretation, this was a grand write. That's the thing about poetry, even the masters we've studied require interpretation and sometimes we're right and sometimes we're wrong. Only the poet usually knows for sure with the great stuff, so don't feel bad. ....jo |
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