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Rain Slickers
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Rain Slickers |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Across an undivided will in secret shared sensations Gleaming in the visions of these open declarations Undoubtedly the frisky romp that seems to drive and dare So timidly the flushed encores that found us standing there Sprinkle down the warm drafts that wander our between Facing up to energies far more than surface glean That calls us to be nearer in the mist of vapors blown That stems the blooms of honesty unfurling lush once sown The comical delusions that we bob when caught unmasked Reclined within the remnant guild of gold embodied past That seems to jump the nerves and jitter in such character A thread that wanders in and through in bonds of deep allure The dazzle of my day but pales the radiance you glow In deluge of a river dance emotions build and flow To hang you by the fingernails in apprehensive wince And sparkle in my whole heart and shines each little glimpse And fond of you may be a better way to tell the tale Or simply be beside and near to let this ship set sail Then lift my face to feel the beads of happiness to light To glide within your tender terms a slicker watertight Copyright Kkh 3/25/04 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
smiling at quite a few lines here... nice writing, TD M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 ...well done Kathleen.Much enjoyed the romp...er, read. Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Then lift my face to feel the beads of happiness to light To glide within your tender terms a slicker watertight dang td , i really like that part , great poem all around ... ; ) hugs wolfy |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
TD -- Wow, talent abouts here. I loved your line endings and, well, just wow!  ....jo |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Excellent job here!  |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
TD Should I go and start the car To hear words echoing Dave |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Note to Grover This is talent Please use your skills and talent and find the time TD What else do I say dave |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I really enjoyed this all the way through but this part is just so damn good! "The comical delusions that we bob when caught unmasked Reclined within the remnant guild of gold embodied past That seems to jump the nerves and jitter in such character A thread that wanders in and through in bonds of deep allure" Eric |
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