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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
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With my darkling

0 posted 2004-01-29 12:14 PM


I never asked, for second chance
I never asked for one more dance
I've always known, to ask, I die
I never asked, for one more lie

I know who I am
I know I am damned
I know who you are
I know I pushed you
To far

I never wanted second guess
I never asked for
wounds undressed
I never pushed
for power plays
i never asked
for one more day

I know who I am
I know I am damned
I know who you are
I know I pushed you
To far

I guess in later days i'm weak
I am the solace that you
seek
I give my power to you
I am the emptiness of you
I know that I'm about to
break
and any minute I will
break


© Copyright 2004 Jason Lyle - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2004-01-29 01:08 PM


this is so sad...only because I know it well
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2004-01-29 02:18 PM


I never asked for
wounds undressed
I never pushed
for power plays

To thine own self be true!!!


Good stuff Jason~

Ericc
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Posts 4178

3 posted 2004-01-29 04:03 PM


Very nice...beautifuly lyrical.


Eric

Richy
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4 posted 2004-01-29 06:24 PM




I liked this Jason.

Thanks for posting it!

Richy



iliana
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5 posted 2004-03-09 11:18 PM


A very good description of a relationship I know of -- sad, but true -- well done, Jason.
passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-03-10 03:47 AM


glad this came back around again....I needed this song tonight
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
7 posted 2004-03-10 06:26 AM


im another who knows this feeling well..
good job putting it into words

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