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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I never asked, for second chance I never asked for one more dance I've always known, to ask, I die I never asked, for one more lie I know who I am I know I am damned I know who you are I know I pushed you To far I never wanted second guess I never asked for wounds undressed I never pushed for power plays i never asked for one more day I know who I am I know I am damned I know who you are I know I pushed you To far I guess in later days i'm weak I am the solace that you seek I give my power to you I am the emptiness of you I know that I'm about to break and any minute I will break |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is so sad...only because I know it well |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I never asked for wounds undressed I never pushed for power plays To thine own self be true!!! Good stuff Jason~ |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very nice...beautifuly lyrical. Eric |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
I liked this Jason. Thanks for posting it! Richy |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
A very good description of a relationship I know of -- sad, but true -- well done, Jason. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad this came back around again....I needed this song tonight |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
im another who knows this feeling well.. good job putting it into words  |
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