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Holding On
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Holding On |
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loner187 Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 106Upstate New York |
As long as the sun sets, The earth turns The stars gleam in the night's sky A smile can live on a face And the wind blows As long as there's still water in the ocean Love exists out there, even just a drop The snow falls And the moon shines As long as one red rose blooms The air chills at night And the sky lights up in day As long as my heart beats And I breathe air You will always have a place in my heart "Love doesn't make the world go 'round. Love is what makes the ride worthwhile." |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A very good write, romantic and sincere!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How lovely your heart speaks... Much enjoyed Amanda. Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What a serene feeling this poem produced!  ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely write |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
enjoyed |
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