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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
From boredom gardens A harvest of bitter grapes Instead of flowers |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ice Good one. Each day that is born Lays pasture to the morn and For the dew of dawn |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sour wine resulting only whine and wafered shell should be served for now |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
time to digest life and sing praise to nature's gifts wine and rose alike~ |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Ice freezing Stilling Thought of sense Dave |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Keeping oneself busy, is not only productive but yeilds many flowers? No? smiles and hugs, liked this one |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Too true! Well done! Have you tried Zoloft????  Kidding!Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I agree |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
+*+*+*+*+ From tended gardens A harvest of vine-sweet grapes Grows with the flowers. +*+*+*+*+  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Believe march winds, kissed with gifts of April showers, bring us may flowers (smiles) Yay! God Bless You, sweet friend, I love your poetry always, this is a wonderful spring gem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ford, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
really enjoyed this...and it also inspire many creative responses! sorry to dissappoint with my "plain" ol' comment..LOL but, again, it was really nice  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
they will come soon keep thinking them |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sage wisdom in verse flowing! |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Thank-you for giving me a smile before going to work. :-) This sweet |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
like plants and trees without water wither and die without love so will you and i always tend your garden give love and respect never reject dont age like a fine whine let nature take it's course give it a chance life could be divine thankyou for sharing |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
I apologize for not replying to theses wonderful replies before this time. My computer cable modem has been acting up for several days and I have not been able to connect for more than a minute or two at a time. It was replaced by my cable company this afternoon...ice |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Seymour Thank you, I like yours also...yours is more Shakespeary.. * Sunshine Thanks, another good one.... * Nighshade Thanks, yet another...this is fun....nature is a gift * Dave P Thanks This one takes a little thought , but makes sense... * LeeJ Thanks..Yes, it does yield many flowers.. When I am bored I think of the song about "counting flowers on the wall" * Vas Thanks, No I haven't tried Zoloft, but three pints of Lager seems to take the edge off when boredom strikes...kidding, (sorta) * P.S. Thanks...try the Lager presciption sometime, as noted, it works for me.... * Earth Angel Thanks....Ahhh, well said....First ya gotta pull out the boredom weeds.. then grapes will be sweet and the flowers beautiful.... * Noah Thanks.....They certainly are "gifts".... * Muted Thanks....I love comments of all kinds, plain or fancy... * inky Thanks....I keep looking out the window, but up to yesterday only saw snow...but I know they are coming..... * iliana Thanks...that swells my head a little..... * froggy Thanks..... Glad to send you out the door with a grin... * MGROVES What a nice little answering poem, thank you... |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
"Whoaaaa!" Did you hear that? This struck like a bolt of lightening. I love the simplicity of words to bring forth the depth. Sadelite |
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