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Twin Demons |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Twin Demons Twin demons take my ship afoul With lightening and their thunders howl They stir the sea to dark abode That leaves the taste of fears erode. They sneak into my minds retire Dressed in wool of sheep attire Dig into my well of dwell And send me into fires hell I fight them with the light of learn The white that holds all colors turn The gyro of the sage of age The salve of green of life’s engage The battle is a loosing one For they go on when I am done And even stone cannot forestall The wearing of the weather all They stay within the human clime They are the demons change and time. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I thought you were writing one about Balladeer and LongJohn?....Oh well, still wasn't terribly disappointed....well done Sigh.... |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
fantastic  really enjoyed this |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Thank goodness you filled us in on those demons! Yes, I suppose time and time can be demons, but so can they be the other, especially through select memories. I enjoyed your poem, Sy. Take care. ~Sadie~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mornin', T-Man! ...Swish, swish, swish with my magic wand! ~ "Change and time" are now your friends!  Another phenomenal write from your poetic soul pen!!! You rock and 'roll', Sir Tumbleweed! Lovesyalotsuknow! EA |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
See More Oh! I like, and can relate to this poem... Perfect ending..all is revealed in those two lines.. enjoyed ________ice ><> |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh Sy... either Randy has a clone, and needs to be returned to his cave, or he's fighting alongside you, and these demons you shall enslave... Either way, the write is right, and follow fancy into the night... keep it up, our good poet Sy... you've tilted bigger wheels in the sky... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, Wrote one about the three little pigs You Long John and Balladeer. I'll put it up one of these days. muted, Thank you my dear. Sadelite, That's what makes them demons. LOL Earth Angel, phenomenal, my that's a five dollar word I thank you love.  ice, Enjoyed your comment, thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sy ... I think many of us here can relate to this poem. Change is supposed to help us grow and sadly for most, we cannot stop time. These are two demons I really dislike!!! Thank you for sharing. Huggles, Marti |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
outstanding write my friend and good morning to ya..., keep those crumy sprites on their toes there, mate....hoist the sails |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! Oh my how I can relate to this one! Excellent read this morn. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Those pesky demons...makes me wanna go back to bed and dream of yesteryear!  Good one Sey! hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marti, You welcome my dear. LeeJ Have you seen the white whale today? LOL Nancy, Thank you sweet, Chris, Thank you dear, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I fight them with the light of learn The white that holds all colors turn The gyro of the sage of age The salve of green of life’s engage ====================================== You fight them with your rhymes divine, your words will stand the test of time. Change will always play the fool ... for hes no match for me poetic King of Cool. *ww*  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You make me flutter and stutter. But then you always did. WWRS |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
your writings are like skipping stones across blue waters... this one leaves ripples that go on for miles |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, What a delightful comment, thank you. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
change is good helps the soul grow and makes spirits fly fear is evil within prevents knowledge and wisdom lifes journey cant begin love your writings |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES Thank you my friend. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Even your darker works have a sense of humor about them. Loved this one! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy I've seen those two myself a few times.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Glad you enjoyed, thank you. Martie, Haven't we all. |
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