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What She Doesn’t See [digging in the archives] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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What She Doesn’t See She does not ever glimpse herself even through the radiance in your eyes; she cannot perceive that she could be something of an enigmatic surprise. She cannot ever envision the depths to which you fall in plummet, nor would she ever accept as true that she helped you reach high summits; She does not know that you see in her green eyes (total devotion, loyalty, devoid of compromise)~ she would not ever believe herself to belong, and be the very heart’s tune of a favored song. She just feels fortunate, indeed that to her you fly God speed, and lay beside her every night bringing to her passions light. ~*~ Repost, slightly revised, from 17 August 2000 Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close... |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Magic words Dave |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful with an ache of sadness Karilea. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy Lee~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Karilea, what a dear, wonderfully written piece of work this is. It is not often that any of us realize what we mean to others. How fortunate we are!  .......jo |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
Page wonderful Page bright Hold my vision This and every Night HOTY EternitysHorizon "High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy." |
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