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Maybe an idea
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Maybe an idea |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
On a world you understand You understand and lying to say that you dont know what you doing Sums you up for your brain We offer everything Because we know in our hearts That everything Hasn't even begun to be something we value We start by fighting to be born We then struggle Then we tolerate Then we reach parent's blessing as everyone is thrown in the sea because no one will admit the survival of the species nor their own limited appreciation that it didn't happen between the ages of 8 and 25 I haven't reviewed this It is maybe something That is no more than an image, a picture And we are all thankfully On an idea dave |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...Because we know in our hearts That everything Hasn't even begun to be... ~*~ It's nice to read something taken from, and lent back to, an idea... I like this, Dave. Thank you. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Yes, a nice read!  |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Sunshine Thank you Grover Cheers Dave |
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