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ethome
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New Brunswick Canada

0 posted 2004-03-22 02:19 AM



http://www.soundclick.com/util/DownloadSon...g.cfm?ID=200127


In a distant world of darkness
far from the home town girl
in the midst of foreign oceans
there's a lonely soldier's world
where the pen of love stops talking
when a promise turns untrue
and far away there's isolation blue

Chorus:
Memoirs of pages filled with passion
tear stained letters in pockets full of truth
dreams inked on promise after action
a river of words in isolation blue

There's night skies lacking moonlight
when a lover loses face
and a soldier can get buried
in the dirt inside his veins
and the chapters of defeat
are written with ancient rules
and far away there's isolation blue.

There's a lover's fire an old desire
a distant fading flame
where wayward winds keep blowing
cross an icy memory lane
and the brightest leaves of Autumn
become colors of the truth
and far away there's isolation blue.

Memoirs of pages filled with passion
tear stained letters in pockets full of truth
dreams inked on promise after action
a river of words in isolation blue.

About this song
World conditions and the long distance love affair factor. Soldier trapped in action overseas and realizes he's lost his true love back home.  Rock/folk/blues


Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

© Copyright 2004 Eric Lewis True - All Rights Reserved
EternitysHorizon
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Twilight's Orchestra
1 posted 2004-03-22 02:31 AM


Makes you think "Dear John"

I guess all isolations are blue


Janet Marie
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2 posted 2004-03-22 09:54 AM


There's a lover's fire an old desire
a distant fading flame
where wayward winds keep blowing
cross an icy memory lane
and the brightest leaves of Autumn
become colors of the truth
and far away there's isolation blue.

Memoirs of pages filled with passion
tear stained letters in pockets full of truth
dreams inked on promise after action
a river of words in isolation blue.
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love these bittersweet bluesy lyrics E-babes, and so glad you reposted so I could get the link again...lost the old one in one of my many comp crashes.
It must be so rewarding to hear your words recorded like that...very cool groovy guy.

Home is a feeling I buried in you ...
I'm alright, I'm alright ... It only hurts when I breathe ...

M.E.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2004-03-25 01:30 AM


Wow, Eric, this was great -- loved the music and really strong message.
MGROVES
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california
4 posted 2004-03-25 02:09 AM


enjoyed!!


passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-03-25 03:04 AM


much enjoyed..thanks for sharing
bbent
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Alaska
6 posted 2004-03-25 03:55 AM


Well done...both lyrics and music.
The minor feel of the tune and dark blue lyrics make for good listening.Enjoyed

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

Martie
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California
7 posted 2004-03-25 05:25 PM


It's great to hear this again, Eric!
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
8 posted 2004-03-25 05:44 PM


Thoroughly enjoyed the presentation Eric.
Excellent write.  Tugs at the heartstrings.
TD

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
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Ala bam a
9 posted 2004-03-25 05:47 PM


very well done...
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
10 posted 2004-03-25 06:04 PM


Many thanks to all who took the time to download this song and listen and comment. I can't tell you how much I appreciate that!

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

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