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Embrace me
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Embrace me |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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the curtains move with the breeze i'll join you on the balcony with your sweet lips your sweet body waiting for mine embrace me i'm all yours don't leave yet the sun isn't awake the moons light still envelopes us you don't need to leave i just want to lay in your arms a little longer feel the warmth from your body thaw my heart thaw my soul you look so good when your only wearing your heart on your sleave.. [This message has been edited by exhale (03-21-2004 04:00 PM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very romantic write, Exhale. Beautiful scene! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
sexy and romantic...and i love the last 2 lines  |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Very nice - I like the touch of almost understated humour that speaks of deep feeling Dave |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sweet write, very romantic |
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