Open Poetry #31 |
Princess |
aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
a diamond neckless on your breast my dear how nice that would look tonight i was once far away but now i am here shimmering for you in the moons light a knight of arms to sweep you away with eyes of crystal and emerald greens she looks into my heart says she'll stay to wake up beside me for real... not like in her dreams lost i was without a clue whisping in the winds looking for you could all of those wishes have for once come true i allow the present to unfold its gifts the song of sweet music drifts into one ear and out my other one like the whispers from a mother to her baby son and when you notice that the journey has only just begun please dont cry my princess for now it's time for fun 3/20/2004 ....... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You drew the widest smile on my heart with this write. Incredible. Really incredible. TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Entirely precious, Aujussy Wolf! |
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Melodious_silence Junior Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 37 |
This really affected me personally. It reminds me of a situation I'm currently in so it touched my heart. Thank you for the tears of love that have strolled many times down my cheeks. The days go by slowly but the years pass like mad. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
aujussy wolf I was touched by this...thank you. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this is gorgeous...*sigh*..you are such a romantic i wanted to pull a few lines out of it, to show you my fave..but, i just couldnt bring myself to do it...it all lives together...flows beautifully... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This touched a place deep inside.. Very much enjoyed...love it! I am quickly becoming a fan of your writing. Hugs~ Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Td .... wild smiles are good for you ! Iliana.... oh thanks for the sweet reply and for reading Melo....glad to share feelings , i always like it when i can really relate to a writing ...your reply was enjoyed Martie ...cool beans m , thanks for the cali sunshine reply Muted ... your replys are as fun to read as your poems , i am all smiles and Enchantress....a fan oh my , you really know how to make a guy blush ...thanks i enjoy your works as well ....... |
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