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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2004-03-20 09:02 PM



a diamond neckless on your breast my dear
how nice that would look tonight
i was once far away but now i am here
shimmering for you in the moons light
a knight of arms to sweep you away
with eyes of crystal and emerald greens
she looks into my heart says she'll stay
to wake up beside me for real...
not like in her dreams
lost i was without a clue
whisping in the winds
looking for you
could all of those wishes have
for once come true
i allow the present to unfold its gifts
the song of sweet music drifts
into one ear and out my other one
like the whispers from a mother to her baby son
and when you  notice that  
the journey has only just begun
please dont cry my princess for now it's time for fun
3/20/2004

.......
JDW III

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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2004-03-20 09:05 PM


You drew the widest smile on my heart with this write.
Incredible.  Really incredible.
TD

iliana
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2 posted 2004-03-20 10:32 PM


Entirely precious, Aujussy Wolf!
Melodious_silence
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3 posted 2004-03-20 10:43 PM


This really affected me personally.  It reminds me of a situation I'm currently in so it touched my heart.  Thank you for the tears of love that have strolled many times down my cheeks.  The days go by slowly but the years pass like mad.  
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4 posted 2004-03-20 10:49 PM


aujussy wolf

I was touched by this...thank you.

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5 posted 2004-03-21 12:20 PM


this is gorgeous...*sigh*..you are such a romantic
i wanted to pull a few lines out of it, to show you my fave..but, i just couldnt bring myself to do it...it all lives together...flows beautifully...

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6 posted 2004-03-21 12:37 PM


This touched a place deep inside..
Very much enjoyed...love it!
I am quickly becoming a fan of your writing.
Hugs~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

aujussy wolf
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7 posted 2004-03-21 03:40 PM


Td .... wild smiles are good for you !

Iliana.... oh thanks for the sweet reply
and for reading

Melo....glad to share feelings , i always like it when i can really relate to a writing ...your reply was enjoyed

Martie ...cool beans m , thanks for the
cali sunshine reply

Muted ... your replys are as fun to read as your poems ,   i am all smiles

and Enchantress....a fan oh my , you really
know how to make a guy blush ...thanks i enjoy your works as well

.......
JDW III

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