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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-03-20 06:12 PM



Secrets


I share something
with you
underneath
the secrets
a wakening
of sorts
thin butterfly wings
wrinkled and pressed
tightly in cocoon
waiting tenderly to
touch the wind

"i wish your room had room for two" John Mayer

© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
icebox
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in the shadows
1 posted 2004-03-20 06:39 PM


*smile*

This one made me all misty.  It takes a lot to do that.

Thanks.

DavePage
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2 posted 2004-03-20 06:47 PM


I really like this

Lovely, sweet yet an inkling of what is yet to come no matter what

Dave

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state of mind
3 posted 2004-03-20 08:05 PM



Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2004-03-20 08:09 PM


sometimes the secret left is sweeter than what follows once let out of the cocoon
very nicely said

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just out of reach
5 posted 2004-03-20 08:10 PM


Ah, so soft and sweet. hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

iliana
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6 posted 2004-03-20 11:13 PM


Helen -- remarkable!  I lovvvvved this!   .........jo
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
7 posted 2004-03-21 12:06 PM


gentle and fragile, but the beauty is there..i enjoyed this
SimplyGold
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8 posted 2004-03-21 12:14 PM


Gentle, tender, full of hope for new beginnings.

Sg

passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2004-03-21 02:17 AM


beautiful!
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