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A Spirits Flight
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A Spirits Flight |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Spirits Flight Said with the dower of her power And the odor of a flower Hovering me with spirits play Throughout the night and through the day Winding breezes of trivial Fairy teases set in pale Posting phantoms of delight Under moonbeams of the night Chameleon to the sense of feel Appealing to my appeal Waking up my memory gland Castles in a sea of sand She stays within a rainbows road Ghosting me the mother load Breaking down the white of light Into the colors of delight And I am waltzing in a seem With the music of a dream |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
Definitely has a dreamy quality about it. Nicely written, I enjoyed much  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sometimes when I read your rhymes of way cool, certain lines just speak to me...stand out in your poetic prophecy...in your clever mastery of cool.... these lines today...make me moth giddy.  Winding breezes of trivial She stays within a rainbows road Ghosting me the mother load Breaking down the white of light Into the colors of delight if you get any cooler...youre gonna have frost bite on your toes. *ww*    Home is a feeling I buried in you ... I'm alright, I'm alright ... It only hurts when I breathe ... M.E. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"She stays within a rainbows road Ghosting me the mother load Breaking down the white of light Into the colors of delight And I am waltzing in a seem With the music of a dream" Beautiful beautiful dear Sy!! What a wonderful read to start my day! ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A very etheral blend of words and images...Much enjoyed Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She stays within a rainbows road Ghosting me the mother load Breaking down the white of light Into the colors of delight And I am waltzing in a seem With the music of a dream ~*~ Sy, I'm sure, very sure, that you wrote a poem with the word "waltz" in it before... some years back. Methinks it is ready for a dusting off, and a repost... Yes, I do.  Good morning, Sy! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
there are very powerful and mysterious entities within the soul of love....incredible write, and sending a good morning right back atcha... Thank you for writing and sharing. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Winding breezes of trivial Fairy teases set in pale Posting phantoms of delight Under moonbeams of the night I love this Seymour. Your poetry is always a true delight to read. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sir Knight. Your "castle in a sea of sand" has a magnificent rainbow arching high above it. You are bathed in glorious "colors of delight". Your soothingly lovely sonnet makes my spirit soar within winding breezes ~ and trip the light fantastic. May I have the next dance?  ~ and may you forever be protected by God's White Light EA |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
She stays within a rainbows road Ghosting me the mother load Breaking down the white of light Into the colors of delight Neat description! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
sea_of_okc Thank you for the read and reply. JM, Glad you are getting more active. You are my Tikerbell. WWRS Nancy, Thank you for the beautiful. scorpio Much enjoyed your comment. Sunshine You have a wonderful memory. Hugs LeeJ Thank you for sharing and replying. Hugs Chris, And you are a shear delight to me. Earth Angel You are the best Angel I ever had. Sadelite, Neat hugs. |
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