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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2004-03-19 04:55 AM


Into my deepest self i withdraw.
Golden and beautiful i am inside, the colour of straw.
She was on my mind,her love was kind, but free and glorious.
My life could be as free as nature, but also capricious.

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Slow motion of my mind, moves frame by frame on her beautiful face.
Sweeping gently her hair from her cheek, love descends through me like the breath of an angel, light of love and grace.
Those smiling lips to kiss in tender moment, elegant neck with sweet scent.
Silken texture of her arms, kindly caressing hands.
from the glowing light of heaven to me you were sent.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-03-19 05:07 AM


great piece, heartfelt indeed
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2 posted 2004-03-19 06:07 AM


very sweet
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3 posted 2004-03-19 06:13 AM


Thank you Dixie....your words are always welcome....

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

Goldenrose
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4 posted 2004-03-19 06:14 AM


Dawn thank you for your words of appreciation....the woman in question is very special.....

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

sea_of_okc
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5 posted 2004-03-19 07:50 AM


Hey Golden, have you been seeing my lady???

Wonderfully expressed... I know just how you feel... sigh

Suetang
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6 posted 2004-03-22 07:48 PM


Absolutely beautiful.  I hope she appreciates your lovely words.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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