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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(Here's a song I just wrote that my teacher and others think could be on the radio if ever heard! I'm submitting this into a college radio station in hope it gets played, yay!  ) Bead Curtain By: Noah Eaton 3/17/04 (riff 1: repeated through verse) Sunshine breeze came skimmin', through my bead curtain, she shook her hips like a smudge stick, runnin' through her thesaurus of flirtin', she wore a calico halter top, Birkenstocks and flowers in her gypsy hair, her topaz eyes boiling like a lava lamp, burning neroli into the air... (riff 2: repeated through chorus) Ooooooohhhh... look who just walked in, through the bead curtain, come dive into my mystic world, you luna tuna, coo-ca-choo... (solo 1) Sugar daydream came swayin', with the birds and the bees, she's like the lava pouring into Pompeii, chinese rain, egyptian sunshine, indian curry, she wears the Van Allen belt, like an extension cord around her waist, plugging me into her heart, here she comes makin' headway... (riff 1: repeated through chorus) She says, "Is this good enough for you?" I say, "I've uncovered the tomb of the groove, and you're its ashram!" Next up is the Pleiades, coo-ca-choo... (solo 2) (riff 3: repeated) Skip into the cosmic window, destination blue rose of the skies, to infinity and beyond... Roll your honey canoe, into the crystal dragon's eyes, ride the pearl seahorse, jettison into your intergalactic mind... (riff 4: repeated) You harnass the good spirits (love those jingle bell anklets) You enhance my room's energy (love diggin' your scene) You slow down the movement of the chi (love your love beads) You show me Cassiopia in the daylight (love holding you under the strobelight) You are my gypsy princess (your heart's the Pakua) You are my north, south, east and west (you're the morning glory and night jasmine) Your eyes spin like a pinwheel (you're my favorite optical illusion) You're the seal of every deal (you're my cosmic obsession) (riff 3: repeated to end) Patchouli butterfly, came flutterin' through my bead curtain, yeah! She shows me the stars the moon, morning sunshine, dancing bears, behind the bead curtain... (closure solo) Wooooo! "You'll find something that's enough to keep you But if the bright lights don't receive you You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20 [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-18-2004 11:35 PM).] |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Noah, I agree it is good enough to be played. Great job and good luck. alan |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Noah, You have a unique style of your own. I would love to hear the sound to match your words! Thank you for sharing the wonder. Sadie |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
It reads well...I'd like to hear it song. Well done Noah. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Genius!!! It brought back a few yummy memories for me, too! Where do we go to hear you perform this??????? I'm 3 hours from Portland! ~K~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful Noah! I would love to hear this as a song. Cha cha cha!!  hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
God bless you, Noah... very well-written!  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah, you have a rare and special talent for ~ everything!  Your writing is so vibrant and rich and fills all of my senses! It is engaging and ever-so captivating! Wishing you lots of angel luck with this one! Loves 'n hugs, EA P.S. These teasers are driving me bananas! I dearly wish to hear you sing these wonderful songs of yours! |
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