Juliet - rave from the grave

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Open Poetry #31

Juliet - rave from the grave

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-03-18 02:24 PM

I dreamed of you in the taxi
I paid my dollars to be there

A barren shack
In a barren place
Chickens outside our room

Making a fool of myself
But not knowing the rules
Would I ever see you again

But

Life isn't like that

Love for twelve hours
In a dirty rotting shack

I like to think you enjoyed yourself
I was too eager to care

And the state of my chest
That morning
Took away all of my cares

Even after thirty years
I still remember you
And maybe an appreciation

That life isn't just a screw.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-03-18 04:58 PM

"I like to think you enjoyed yourself
I was too eager to care"-- had that experience too, Dave.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-03-18 06:03 PM

Grover
I thought you were going to say to me you had posted this before.

I just wish I had the for-runner to this

Dave

EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

3 posted 2004-03-29 04:36 PM

nope.. nope it isnt..

but i think without it, life just wouldnt be the same

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2004-03-29 05:09 PM

Funny that it begins that way though.

y'got me to thinkin' again, Dave.

(Everybody take cover?)

and from such humble beginnings...

Enjoyed.

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