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PKreturns
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2004-03-18 01:28 PM

So dark, so beautiful,
So tender it hurts
Got something to give
And there’s no one around again
Just me and these words

Life is a wave carrying us
To the hither shore
There’s only one voice
And it’s the voice of you
Calling from afar

I want to feel without fear
And I want to cry your tears
But I cannot do
Those things without you

What you want is what you get
Be careful how you pray
Because prayers are sometimes answered
And you find yourself longing
For some other day

If wishes were diamonds
Held up to the sky
It would not be the answer
And you would be blinded
By the brilliance of their light

I want to touch without taste
And I want your time to waste
But I cannot do
Those things without you

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-03-18 01:29 PM

It's so good to see your words
here again, in the blue pages...

Feels like summer, returning...

PKreturns
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

2 posted 2004-03-18 01:38 PM

Thanks sunshine. Sorry, that's my last.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2004-03-18 02:34 PM

Say What!

PK...
Write on!
TD

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

4 posted 2004-03-18 02:41 PM

You by the touch of your arm
Echo the noise of the jewels
Possessed

Dave

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2004-03-18 09:42 PM

I want to feel without fear
And I want to cry your tears
But I cannot do
Those things without you
=============================

If wishes were diamonds
Held up to the sky
It would not be the answer
And you would be blinded
By the brilliance of their light

I want to touch without taste
And I want your time to waste
But I cannot do
Those things without you
===========================

Me thinks time with you wouldnt be time wasted if ya promise read your poetry aloud. *S*
love the imagery and wistfull bittersweet of this write..
somewhat different style for you from your usual rhyme..I like the change up.

We carry on our backs the burden time always reveals ...
The lonely light of morning, the wound that would not heal.

Sarah McLachlan

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-03-18 09:47 PM

Beautiful..simply beautiful!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

~ Kahlil Gibran

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

7 posted 2004-03-18 11:25 PM

"So dark, so beautiful,
So tender it hurts
Got something to give
And there’s no one around again
Just me and these words"

A place I know well...

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