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Mt Rowley
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since 2004-01-06
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0 posted 2004-03-17 05:36 PM


Memory surge

I am not here with you
my presence is near but my mind is not
I am far from here in a place from before
Dwelling down on what has been

Pain in mind is terrible but dominant
Forward from peace and hope
Too many unanswered questions
Too many days lost sleep

Sleep obscures my memory
Pain is forgotten 'til i don't mind
Alone brings out the pain
those around make pain and memory fade

When will i answer to myself?
when i allow my self to remember
when the pain is ground

Im new to poetry if you liked it please tell me what you think of my other stuff

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
1 posted 2004-03-17 06:42 PM


keep your head up, breathe one breath at a time...and take baby steps forward
DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-03-17 07:00 PM


In a memory
Remember
That others
Remember

If it is bad
Let it go
If you feel
It is still good

ask the question

why do you feel it is bad
do you want to make it good


Dave

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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
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3 posted 2004-03-18 05:14 PM


Keep writing... enjoyed this!
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