Open Poetry #31 |
We all sit and dream |
DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Almost like a joint freed of meat urging meaning to fly out into a thin substance that has substance Writing on the cuff as one of my - lets write something words ********************************************* Lying young in bed if only you could fly your spirit to achieve your physical needs Being allowed to escape by your parents who would never admit you were human but treated all as themselves Neglecting according to sex of choice as what you assumed to be or would be as the choice of neighbours defined the characteristics of your family, career and their desires You stood there one day And you still stand And I will quote the "Dave Allen - the Irish Mind of Honesty" "Go with your God, Whomever, or whatever you consider your God to be" Dave never mentioned the point that parents are only human and most only interested in pushing you into areas they didn't venture into, dont know any reality about and expect you to survive in them |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Lying young in bed if only you could fly your spirit to achieve your physical needs You painted a very realistic scene, Dave. There is that period when the own room becomes a refuge ... Love, Margherita |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
This is about kids rebelling against their parents who defined their childrens achievements as what makes them look good or in the worst cases is to score against their partner by destroying a favourite child It is not about anything but children growing to adults Dave |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DavePage Interesting read, enjoyed. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, I understand, more than you will ever know ... Love, Margherita |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I came back to write further about the words and you had written. Put it down to my habit they were not related to your comments Dave |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks first and foremost for replying Margherita And we forget Love Dave Seymour Tabin Thanks Dave |
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