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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-03-21 02:48 PM


Almost like a joint freed of meat urging meaning to fly out into a thin substance that has substance

Writing on the cuff as one of my - lets write something words

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Lying young in bed if only you could fly your spirit to achieve your physical needs

Being allowed to escape by your parents who would never admit you were human but treated all as themselves

Neglecting according to sex of choice as what you assumed to be or would be as the choice of neighbours defined

the characteristics of your family, career and their desires

You stood there one day

And you still stand

And I will quote the "Dave Allen - the Irish Mind of Honesty"

"Go with your God, Whomever, or whatever you consider your God to be"

Dave never mentioned the point that parents are only human and most only interested in pushing you into areas they didn't venture into, dont know any reality about and expect you to survive in them



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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-03-21 03:05 PM


Lying young in bed if only you could fly your spirit to achieve your physical needs


You painted a very realistic scene, Dave.
There is that period when the own room becomes a refuge ...

Love, Margherita

DavePage
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2 posted 2004-03-21 03:10 PM


This is about kids rebelling against their parents who defined their childrens achievements as what makes them look good or in the worst cases is to score against their partner by destroying a favourite child

It is not about anything but children growing to adults

Dave

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2004-03-21 03:10 PM


DavePage
Interesting read, enjoyed.

Margherita
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4 posted 2004-03-21 03:13 PM


Yes, I understand, more than you will ever know ...
Love, Margherita

DavePage
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5 posted 2004-03-21 03:14 PM


I came back to write further about the words and you had written.

Put it down to my habit they were not related to your comments


Dave

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6 posted 2004-03-21 03:29 PM


Thanks first and foremost for replying

Margherita

And we forget

Love Dave  

Seymour Tabin

Thanks

Dave


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