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From These Chains I've Broken Free
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From These Chains I've Broken Free |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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There is a lot of raw, pent up emotion in this piece which I have felt the need to release for some time.It was written about my sister who hurt me deeply some time ago and who has never apologised for what she did.We have very little contact now which I have finally accepted and through my love of writing I have been able to move on.I feel a much stronger person from the experience. * * * I had never been that confident Until my inner voice was heard You belittled me once too often You always had the final word To you my feelings were superfluous They were insignificant to you Your crocodile tears brought sympathy But I was able to see straight through I was the black sheep of the family But you managed to achieve your goal I was crushed beyond repair As you ripped out my heart and soul I cannot forget the hurt But my words take away the pain I have moved on with my life 'tho the battle scars remain The friends I've made are many They seem to love me more than you I see them every day They are a part of all I do You show no interest in my life You're much too selfish to see But you will never bring me down From these chains I've broken free I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins [This message has been edited by Suetang (01-29-2004 12:45 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh dear Sue...I'm sorry about the split...family is important, and I can only pray things will work out for you two. Heartfelt write, very strong, but sad the same |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Great piece Sue. This sounds like my brother and I. We have now not spoken to one another for 5 years. Oh well. Love the poem...keep them coming. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
As an only child, I cant phathom the feelings of a sibling giving such pain,,,,you do well putting it accross,,,,and I am happy for you that you have found your own way to deal with it in a healthy way Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Oh Sue, I'm so sorry to hear of the incident with your sister, dearest friend, I send angel hugs out to you as I know how it hurts to be divided from family and how selfish our own blood can be but know deep down she will always love you and will always accept you as her sister as you do her! (sad sigh) We send angel comfort hugs your way, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Oh Sue, I am sorry to hear about this. I have been in squabbles with my siblings over the years, but it always gets worked out, one way or another. I hope you two can get this resolved. Usually as time goes by, we get a little wiser, and much more forgiving. I wish you all the best, Richy |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sue darling heart sister this is outstandingly well written, you manage to compress your thoughts into perfect phrases that fit them beautifully I so awed by your talent, and love to see it displayed so beautifully. Your words have healed your soul and you shine as brightly as the star you are darling one. Absolutely wonderful writing from you, I’m well and very happy, thanks for asking  Love you always And forever Mushy Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sue, it sounds like you and I have the same kind of sister. So, I understand your feelings. I, too, went on with my life. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Sue, Right now my entire family is split up and either on this side or that. Unfortunately, my brother and I are having much trouble in our relationship and it is killing me. I understand...and this poem was a great sentiment... |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Extremely well written. Thought provoking. Honest, humble and sincere. I have the same problem... I'm sure most families do. I will pray for you. Grover. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sue -- I think we must be kindred spirits! Or, perhaps, these sibling things happen more than most people admit -- couldn't say. At any rate, your writing really touched me. ...jo |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I am so very grateful for so many replies. I cannot forgive my sister for what she did and the problem is that she doesn't even think she did anything wrong. I have moved on and my writing has been my saviour, as are the many wonderful friends I have met here. I feel much comfort from your words for which I thank you. jo - it is comforting to know that I am not alone and I am sorry that you have had a similar experience. My Mum blames me for what happened and asks why I don't contact my sister, yet she doesn't ask my sister why she hasn't contacted me. I feel like a square peg in a round hole. Take care.......Sue I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Your gifts are many Sue...and the beauty of your heart certainly shines. Good write. TD |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Kathleen - I am ever so grateful for your lovely words, thank you so much. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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