Open Poetry #31 |
From where I stand |
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
* From where I stand my gaze roams over the past and stretches into the future. As if viewing a crystal, I see the seeds the blossoms the fruits …. Life! And I contain it all! Now. All that is flows and vibrates in my essence, making me a vessel of everlasting love and beauty… From where I stand I can see your smile dancing lovingly through time. It carries the sun the moon, the stars of all epochs and leaves the magical tracks of infinity on my soul. From where I stand I collect all the fragments of my journey. Assembled, they form a sparkling gem. I reach out to touch eternity and find it in your eyes. There, You wait for me to embrace and taste the Whole of You. * |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A journey without moving... excellent! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
It carries the sun the moon, the stars of all epochs and leaves the magical tracks of infinity on my soul. wonderful writing~ M |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Wow, Margherita! The beauty in your heart shines through vividly throughout this lovely piece of writing. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
a beautiful journey of the heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Delightful little shivers ran through my body as I read your exquisite piece of writing! You had to know I'd love this one, kindred spirit poetess! And the crystal is so pleasing to the eye! Love & crystal light, Linda |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Margherita , this gave such a beautiful shining glow .... magical indeed Hope |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the eyes of the prism viewed from within your lovely world, very nice |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I can see your smile dancing lovingly through time. It carries the sun the moon, the stars of all epochs and leaves the magical tracks of infinity on my soul." Exquisite...absolutely beautiful!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I love how you speak of love....it glows on you and very beautifully.... ~~**~~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all my dear poet friends for stopping by and commenting so lovingly. Wishing you all a beautiful and creatively gratifying week! Love and Joy. Margherita |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
From where I stand, I see a beautiful poem...thank you for sharing your gifts, Margherita... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I enjoyed this so much. Wonderful journey this morning. Hugs, Marti |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Yessss , many pats on the back for this write very creative and brimming with emotions i just woke up and i am happy now thanks ....... |
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PassionatelyRomantic Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 190 |
wonderful write! |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
This is VERY VIVID!! Life, love, feeling....it's all a gem! Lovely!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Had to read it three times Seems almost out of balance and then an underlying image of a sum, a moon and meterorite hurtling in became the vision Dave |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear poet friends, thank you all from my heart for your loving comments. Dave, you made me smile …. within every source of light I only see Love…... but it can come crashing down quite powerfully …....and shake me out of balance …....haha Love to all. Margherita |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - this is a gem, written by you... BC |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
From where I stand my gaze roams over the past and stretches into the future. WOW! yOU GOT ME FROM THE GET-GO! I enjoyed your writing. I so identify or have identified with what you say in your poetry. Sadie |
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