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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2004-01-28 05:43 PM

~*~

Simple pleasures
like the softest smile
given in silent applause
or a kiss between parted lips
a quiet coaxing
drawn in fine lines and contours
detailing the tender bend
a secret whisper of the heart
silhouettes in duet
poised between dreams
and short breaths.

~*~

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

1 posted 2004-01-28 06:03 PM

I don’t know what to say Bluesy,
except that no one else does it like you...

This is my absolute favorite of yours.
Well... at least until your next one...

I hope who ever you’re writing to,
or for, realizes just how lucky he is...

It would be such a shame if he didn’t

This was really wonderful!
Richy

Youngatheart
Member

since 2003-12-30

Posts 333

2 posted 2004-01-28 06:17 PM

This is beautiful and very special...soft and gentle.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2004-01-28 09:50 PM

Beautiful, Lori...just beautiful.

"Love isn't blind, it just only sees what matters." William Curry
http://community.webshots.com/user/toniasmom
Heart Hugs, Ethel

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2004-01-28 10:23 PM

...so tender, so sweet...this one just took me along. That moment is one that clings to the memory as almost nothing else can do, and you capture it perfectly here. Well done.

....and ditto Richy...that is one lucky dude....

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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2004-01-28 10:35 PM

Perfection!
TD

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-01-28 10:46 PM

"silhouettes in duet
poised between dreams
and short breaths."

Exquisite Lori....love this one!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Is that love I see in your eyes...
or merely a reflection of mine? ~

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

7 posted 2004-01-29 09:08 AM

oooo....nice! ~K~

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

8 posted 2004-01-29 09:18 AM

Hi Blues, this is beautiful. "a quiet coaxing" is touching.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2004-01-29 10:54 PM

Thanks to each of you for reading my little bit of romance.

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

10 posted 2004-01-30 10:08 PM

Mmmmmmmmm...good!

McLean

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2004-01-30 11:16 PM

(smiles) Oh Lori, this is absolutely gorgeous, sweet friend, your heart envelops true blessings and paints them into pretty pictures, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

12 posted 2004-01-30 11:50 PM

sounds dreamy like a prelude to valentines day,
nice write girlie, very nice

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

13 posted 2004-01-31 05:49 AM

dang! love the write...and the new picture! You go girl!

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

14 posted 2004-01-31 11:04 AM

enjoyed this

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

15 posted 2004-01-31 11:49 AM

::sigh:: Absolutely wondrous, Bluesy...thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

16 posted 2004-01-31 02:23 PM

I enjoyed this very much. Well done.

believe in what your heart feels...

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

17 posted 2004-01-31 03:55 PM

silhouettes in duet
poised between dreams
and short breaths.

I sit in silent appreciation... this is beautiful! *S*

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

18 posted 2004-01-31 06:49 PM

Wow..

SG

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

19 posted 2004-01-31 06:53 PM

YEP! PURRRRRRRRfect, it is.....a most
pleasurable read.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

20 posted 2004-01-31 06:55 PM

Splendid, indeed... a very cozy place to be... in your poem! Excellent work!!! Grover.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

21 posted 2004-01-31 09:35 PM

You are all so good to me, thank you thank you, so much!

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