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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Emotions I strangle in the mangled knot A play produced with tangled plot. Reality that cannot be The brewing of forever’s tea I burn like coal upon a flame Burning out without an aim Compressed in thrust and turned to dust And do not know what I can trust? I quiver in the gel of life Like a note upon a fife Drifting off into the veil Upon a sea of endless sail I synthesize the present goal The temple of a symbols soul Turn my cheek the other way The coming of another day I am a knit within a weave This is all I can believe. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Very profound Very introspect Dave |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
"I am a knit within a weave..." I was taken with that line, Sy. This write is a tapistry of beauty. believe in what your heart feels... |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Excellent craft in this, and strong thought. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent morning read Sy! I'm off and running this Monday morn. Have a great day! ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Top o' the mornin', m'dear sonneteer! 'Tis a mighty tangled web ye weave! Ye brew the best of "forever's tea"! As ye "burn like coal upon a flame", "I quiver in the gel of life ~ like a note upon a fife". Play on sweet Sy, play on...  You weave the finest of all tapestries,  EA |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
"I am a knit within a weave." Sy, me thinks you more a "purl". Nice write. ~K~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I burn like coal upon a flame Burning out without an aim Compressed in thrust and turned to dust And do not know what I can trust? ============================= me thinks Randy-dandy wrote that verse.  loltrust in that pen of yours...it never lets us down.    |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey Seymour , enjoyed the introspective view of your emotional brew Hope |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you are such an intricate participation of the entire world, universe. One soul, so prudently linked...isn't it amazing? Morning Sy! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - yet another thought provoking write. Excellent. hugs, Chris  Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dave, Nice comment thank you. scorpio Loved your reply, thank you. icebox, Thank you for reading it and your comment. Nancy, Thank you sweet and have a good day. Earth Angel, And you hover above. all my love. Kahlil Awful nice, thank you. JM I think my weave is next to yours. Hope, Enjoyed your comment. Thank you Chris, Love back sweety. LeeJ Good morning and it is amazing. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I spoke to a number of young students today, Sy...and I used the word "weave". I hadn't seen your poem then...but I sense you were feeding in some words to my soul, via ESP... Thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine You are sweet, |
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