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Ryan
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0 posted 2004-03-15 01:20 AM


bernard shakey

you must remember that
in his younger days
they came to him, men,
every single one of them,
and said, "this was not the plan"
"of course you are right"
he responded, "but still...."

years later there was a funeral
that many believed was his,
and in fact he lay in the casket
for quite some time, grinning and
convincing everyone that he was
more dead than anyone else
who had died in recent time,
JFK, Jesus, and John Wayne excluded.

but soon the word came round that there
was orange drink (a particular favorite
of his that had helped him through
the hardest days) being served in back.

not much later, someone glimpsed
him near the exit and exclaimed
(not asked)
"you had us all
you had us all
and gave it up for that!"

"of course you are right"
he responded, "but still..."
and drank his orange drink
and left the room
without another word.

in heaven,
everything is fine

© Copyright 2004 Ryan Williams - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-03-15 01:29 AM


Tho' I have not figured out who bernard shakey is, you have made quite a character sketch!  I really enjoyed this!
Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2004-03-15 03:05 AM


LOL, that crazy young'un
he rocks

steavenr
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3 posted 2004-03-15 11:08 PM


made me do some research on Bernard Shakey...interesting character...very interesting...puts your poetry in a more understandable light now...nicely done...and thanks for the educational junket
Sunshine
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4 posted 2004-03-16 10:16 AM


As did Steven, a little research reveals quite the character...well done, Ryan...you made some of us "look" into this personality...
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