Open Poetry #31 |
If Only I Had Pockets |
Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
~thankyou to my sister Enchantress for the inspire~ . . . . If only I had pockets I would go to the store with Dad. I would buy myself the biggest bone That a Shih Tzu ever had. If only I had pockets I would hide away Mom's keys. Then both of us would go for drives As long as she spoke "Please?" I would gather chestnuts on our walks, and take them home for play. Or stash some kibble in the folds, To snack on some other day. If only I had pockets I could save my chewy toy The one that's soft and smelly, and makes me salivate with joy. Each day I gaze out of this window Until the sky turns dark. Imagining showing off my pockets To my envious pals down at the park. . . Chris Barker January 2004 ~~~ ~hugs to my dog Meeka~ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Annabelle isn't the only one who is smiling! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Chris!! Chris!! You did it! This is exactly what we were talking about the other day! Yes..you must find Meeka a sweater with pockets! Love this Chris..well done..so cute, and give Meeka a hug from Auntie Nancy. ~Smiles, Hugs, Love & Miss ya, Teed~ ~ Is that love I see in your eyes... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Too cute Chris, your poem and the picture! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwwww, your Shih Tzu looks soooooooo adorable, sweet friend, hehehe, and if Meeka had pockets, she could tuck away all the meat in the freezer as rations for dinner! LOL! (does happy giggly dance) Awwwwwwww! (pets Meeka on head softly then rubs belly softly) Yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hee hee hee. Thankyou everyone. It was fun writing this. Glad you enjoyed. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
cutest little poem matching that furry little puppy in the window! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Very Cute Chris. Wonderful picture too. May I ask who walks whom? believe in what your heart feels... |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Aw, this is cute! Who knows what dogs are thinking....give Meeka a pat for me, ok? ~sky Hold on, if you feel like letting go |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Chris this is absolutely the cutest poem and have to send this to Kit, she absolutely loves dogs. Adorable, this was, yes it was! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Very cute... adorable even. Well done - quite the amusing bit o' poetry. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
What a slice of the good ole heartwarming life... with a Shih Tzu! A very well written poem, upbeat and warm! Grover. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou all so much! Hugs!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Chris, I love this. It is so cute. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Very cute, Chris... Thanks for the smile, my friend... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Darn it... if only they could cross a Shih Tzu with a kangaroo... Yeah, but then you’d need a pogo stick to take him out for his evening jump... ! ... Ahhh, forget it... That was really cute Chris! Richy |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thanks all!! Meeka is sitting in my lap admiring the pic of herself....hee hee. hugs and a woof woof !! |
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Chrissypooh Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 80Canada |
Very Cute |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Great thought and imaginitive play in this one Chris. Fun. TD |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh my...this is so adorable! |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Awwwwwwwww ... I loved this Chris! What a visual, lol. What a wonderful way to look at things through the eye of our furry four legged cuties! I know a dog who wished she had these same pockets too. This was great! Best wishes, /Kit |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a delight this is!!! *S* Thank you for the smiles. *S* |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Chris, I've started to reply to this a couple of times. I wanted to get a picture of Scooter for Meeka, but I've gone and forgotten it again. Anyway, he sure would like to meet her. I loved your poem, and Scooter did too. Hugs to you and Meeka, Ethel and Scooter |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
NightShade~ This is sooooo positively ADORABLE~ My brother has one (almost identical) that is 12 years old ... and still as spry as as a pup~ His name is Macho ... (the doggie ... not my brother) *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Chris...this was adorable...I have a Chihuahua that says, IWTIHWT! |
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