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To see a King
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To see a King |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
On the castle I drum my drum A swirling wind In the skies Hears my drum I watch the world To know my drum And a new born king His army at his side I pray each day my life To see the next Now my drum sounds No longer long I hear my lord Call To make a song To spare his life And my drum beats Heating the skin To protect me From within I pray each night My notes will beat A drum Of awakeness Not retreat To hear a new king Ta rat tat dum I drum my drum To see a new born king Ta rat tat dum |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Makes me think...  |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
nice twist , interesting , good stuff man ....... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Jesus died for somebody's sins but not mine meltin' in a pot of thieves wild card up my sleeve thick heart of stone my sins my own they belong to me, me people say "beware!" but I don't care the words are just rules and regulations to me, me .........patti smith punk poetess priestess |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
A new take on things, Dave! Keep drumin'.  .....jo |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Grover Thanks - I was trying to capture images but beat seemed to be more important, almost than the words aujussy wolf thanks inkedgoddess Lovely words Ink - never saw Patty Smith - did managed to see Little Richard and Patti La Belle in a cellar in SoHo once. iliana Thanks jo Dave |
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