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Jes
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Denmark

0 posted 2004-03-14 12:30 PM


""" The time to wait ........................... """"

is more like time i hate.


To be well i need to know .,.
How the story will go .,.

What are my needs .,.
Are they more like blank sheets .,.

I wait and wait .,.
Im on her hook and feel like bait .,.

But i cant let her go .,.
She knows i think she love me also .,.

The passes by .,.
With her i would go fly .,.

I wish and wish .,.
She knows i send her my kiss .,.

True words of love .,.
She is my angel dove .,.

To win i have to loose .,.
But for which site im going to choose .,.

I dont know .,.
Were it will go .,.

But i love her more and more .,.
She has something that i adore .,.

She has my heart .,.
And me i am a of hers a part .,.

Mann what do i do .,.
I really have no clue .,.

Smile

Jes


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-03-14 02:08 PM


Jes, if you knew what life has in store for you, it would be boring...

the future can be exciting because you don't know what will happen...

hugs and smiles,
Dixie

Jes
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since 2003-10-21
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2 posted 2004-03-14 02:39 PM


Smile wery true wery true

smile thanks for reading Dixie.

Jes


ParisGrl
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since 2000-06-01
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3 posted 2004-03-15 09:55 AM


Jes,

Great poem!  I enjoyed it.......enjoy the anticipation.  It will make it worthwhile in the end.  

~Laura~

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