Open Poetry #31 |
Surrounds |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
The sigh deepens as I navigate my thoughts, eyes roaming the surroundings room by room. The dying flowers on the table, centered, a reminder of once being good to myself. The silence, a week ago comforting, now grating to ears locking in the message of emptiness. Piles of mail, unopened, untouched but for the top and bottom, unwanted. Phobias creeping in, days collecting into weeks, unlived and useless, time becoming meaningless living in fear. "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Impressive write and in certain passages also familiar ... but it's just too sad. Renew the flowers, be good to you. You are not alone, ever, dear Maureen! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very sad...such a lonely write by someone who should never feel this way. Well done Maureen. Hugs~ Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hi nakdthoughts. Oh my this is sad...but so well written. I love it of course. I am very pleased I decided to read this today. I really haven't been feeling well lately, but today I woke up feeling a little better and so I decided to treat myself with some reading...glad this was one of the ones I chose to open. Bravo! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, You need a date. LOL Good write. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
pssssttt Sy, no kidding... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well I can see that I'm gonna hafta come up there and take you out on the town |
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