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Twiddle Dumb |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Twiddle Dumb Softly, softly twiddle dumb Beat upon his little drum In metaphor of mind you know A little sun to make it so And as he thought upon the day He came upon some thoughts astray Of happenings you know the kind A thorn that stays within the mind Here he stopped to vegetate The up and down of past relate The smiles and riles of mystic Isles This champagne with a touch of bile He never really understood The psyche of her womanhood The tender of a flowers hour Or the power of its dower A mind that could not reach across To touch the magic golden floss |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Tweedle Dee... I don't understand how men think either... Cute write - Morning Sweet Sy...  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Top o' the morning to you, T-Man! You certainly couldn't be referring to yourself in this poem ~ for you may "Twiddle" but you sure ain't "Dumb"! lol  Oodles of strudels, EA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"A thorn that stays within the mind" and yanno sy? Had I thought for a second you might read a thorn, I wouldn't post it. That is how dear you are m'dear.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Thats cuz Tweedle Dumb didnt have a Randy Dragon-dee  lolAny one ever tell ya that you write with golden floss.  *ww*  I am sure of my reasons, embracing the seasons, |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
One should always reach across and touch the magic golden floss!! Good morning Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
A mind that could not reach across To touch the magic golden floss WOWWWW .... Impact severe , awesome Big S -wolf |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"He never really understood The psyche of her womanhood The tender of a flowers hour Or the power of its dower A mind that could not reach across To touch the magic golden floss" Excellent read this morning Sy! Very much enjoyed. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A mind that could not reach across To touch the magic golden floss But now you do! Love and a beautiful Sunday, dear Poet! Margherita  |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Good morning Seymour. It has been a while since I popped in to read you. Glad I did. I love this piece. You really have a gift there my friend. Bravo! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan Hello sweety how are you? long time no hear. Earth Angel, And Oodles of strudels to you. serenity And you are to me. scorpio Good morning and thank you my friend. aujussy , Thank you for the awesome. Nancy, You are a love. Hugs Margherita Yes I do, thank you. Hugs EvocativeVerse2 Yes it has been a while, thank you for the bravo. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I hope you are well, Miss you. WWRS |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Bring her a rose for her heart .,. And she will tell you were to start .,. Hi Seymoor Smile Jes |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jes Thank you. passing Thank you. |
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