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Fisherman
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0 posted 2004-03-13 11:25 PM


Singing ever so softly in whispers transcendent
First wisp of dawning in hyaline hues
Calls out to Helios in hushed voice resplendent
Awaken…

Dawn is perhaps like a fairy with wings translucent
Appearing diurnal afraid of night’s shadows,
But too fragile to survive sun’s sear omnipotent.
Awaken…

Begone shadowed cloak of midnight’s ebon skies,
As evening’s stars and moon in evanescence flee
Before new day's dawn, advent of yesterday’s reprise.
Awaken…

Awaken earth and all its creatures as night is swept
From welkin skies by gentle breeze of dawn’s first breath
As dawning unshackles yet another day, from over distant mountains kept,
Awaken…

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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2004-03-13 11:27 PM


What a beautiful write.
TD

Martie
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2 posted 2004-03-13 11:34 PM


Fisherman

So beautiful!

iliana
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3 posted 2004-03-14 12:02 PM


Welcome to Passions, Fisherman.  A fabulous first entry here!
passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-03-14 12:45 PM


oooooo! I like this!

Welcome back to Passions

1slick_lady
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5 posted 2004-03-14 02:28 AM


beautiful...just like a wish

welcome to the passion

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6 posted 2004-03-14 06:19 AM


Hi, welcome to Passions

a very lovely first post....especially being that i share my name with the sunrise! LOL
Nice to meet you
~Dawn

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