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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan 
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It all comes together again mysterious yet believable somehow the snow stays cold, and the wind still blows making a name through the maze travel on young wolf, make this yours breakthrough this hazey dream ... .. through to the next level love made me , love will change thee back to the home where i came from what awaits is only choosen openings ...where time continues things people think will happen games and movies , pattern statistics witness to arrival Inside the deepest forest sleeps a secret of so many things Ages have passed until now could everything be as it seems a ringing of the division bell in the distance Outside the commotion ... retreating to the hills welcomes abound leaf beds and a star ceiling The creatures smell me again ... ...how long will you be staying young james ...whisper the winds The trails of your dreams follow behind you how much more time do you wish for ? a sudden extention would take you there Your heart weeps tears of descovery realize who you are . ... ... J D Wolf III ( from 1/2002 right before returning to michigan from the mountains ) -Wolf |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Deep and beautiful write. Inside the deepest forest sleeps a secret of so many things Ages have passed until now could everything be as it seems a ringing of the division bell in the distance Love, Margherita  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You speak of coming home... For the blood of familiar and welcome will always beat strongest. "The animals smell me again..." There is something about this place that settles far deeper in the soul than landscape. Great Write! TD |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I could sense the essence of native spirit throughout this moving write! Captivating! Love & Light, EA |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"Outside the commotion ... retreating to the hills welcomes abound leaf beds and a star ceiling The creatures smell me again ... ...how long will you be staying young james ...whisper the winds The trails of your dreams follow behind you how much more time do you wish for ?" this is my favourite part! but, the whole poem rest neatly where you meant it to, down in the ancient place we all have....where we always seek home... where we always follow a calling "back"...even if the places we seek have long since been burried by time. this "felt" right so that means i enjoyed not only reading it..but "being there"  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! thanks for sharing |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
always happy to hear from you all ... Margherita, ...enjoyed your fav. lines , and thanks for the added love Thisdiamond, ...far deeper into the relms of fate and synchronicity....to a place where reality and dream are one, glad you found it too and yes i was about to leave keystone , Co. and move back to my homeland of the Great Lakes ...i still miss the mountains ...earth angel, ...earthy , growing up in a native land seems to have rubbed off on my style and way of life muted, ....my lovley so good of you to be here too you found me for sure  right here .... passing shads, ...anytime , and i take wow as a compliment loll .... HUGS HUGS HUGS thanks your all beautiful : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) : ) " sometimes you will keep what you don't want and other times you will give away what you need" |
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WildPoet Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 205California |
Good stuff. WildPoet  |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
wild lol thanks for the reply , cool emotion icon thingy lol ....... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
your forest is my sea |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
James .....glad you liked it Ink ..... how cool , my forest leading to your sea thankyou both , Jwolf |
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