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Open Poetry #31

The struggle For Love.

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

0 posted 2004-03-13 04:20 AM

Absorbing the shadows of darkness, i suffer the lonely blackness that stalks me.

Plunged into the shadow, i am submerged to deep levels, free from this will i ever be?

Through jungles of sweating claustrophobia, i struggle through my life.
Stumbling on the occaisional sweetest of blooms, of rare pastel shade.

One day i will be out of my tangle of trees.
Then you will be there, waiting for my love, something in this life for which i was made.

Our love will be in lush green meadows, emerald and verdant.
Closely holding each other, nobody else on earth will exist but us, and our place in history.

Until then i hack at the unforgiving vegetation, clearing a path to you.
Destiny i head for, and our deepest love of passion and glory.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (03-13-2004 04:59 AM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-03-13 05:16 AM

sounds hopeful

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

2 posted 2004-03-13 08:06 PM

i like how you went from a very sad begining to an ending full of hope and determination.
very Nice Phil

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