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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2004-03-12 09:22 PM


"SomeAdvice"


I'm not so unworthy
nor an ungratefull fool.

I am a child
I am a woman

Expect nothing from me
I will give you the world

If you tare apart my world...
you won't be apart of it.

Juju


© Copyright 2004 Juju - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-03-12 10:07 PM


Juju
A good message.

Grover
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2 posted 2004-03-12 10:08 PM


Very sound advice Juju... enjoyed this!
Juju
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3 posted 2004-03-12 10:56 PM


Oh thank you guys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I appreciate your apply!

Juju

Opoetry4me
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4 posted 2004-03-12 11:06 PM


JuJu,
This has a very nice message. Good work!


passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-03-13 05:31 AM


yep! sounds right to me
Goldenrose
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6 posted 2004-03-13 05:49 AM


Advice of wisdom...

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

Juju
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7 posted 2004-03-13 04:54 PM


I am glad you liked it!
Opoetry4me-
Smiles......

ps-
Smiles

Goldenrose-
Yes, or a warning.
lots of love Juju

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