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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-03-12 06:19 PM

Somber votive light wavering the sail of night
In concentrate of flame and shadow play
Your picture paints itself upon my eyes
As dawn in glory’s arms will rise
Explains to me a destiny

What pleasure in the reign of soft refrain
A pause that traces heartfelt places
Mid air, mid breath escapes me
Souls uncover in remittance fully
Fingers laced as passion graced

Sweet love for you swells lingered view
Yearn as it concaves on molten waves
My hand to follow flows, caresses as it goes
Upon your shallow breaths in quest
Flickering beguile the taste of happiness

Copyright Kkh 3/12/04

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

1 posted 2004-03-12 07:04 PM

This is beautiful.

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

2 posted 2004-03-12 07:22 PM

This is more than just "alright" it's beautiful and downright... good!

Deb

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2004-03-13 11:28 AM

Sweet love for you swells lingered view
Yearn as it concaves on molten waves
My hand to follow flows, caresses as it goes
Upon your shallow breaths in quest
Flickering beguile the taste of happiness

Very, very beautiful Kathleen.....as is
al of your poetry.