Open Poetry #31 |
From Far and Distant Place (16,000 th post) |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+ While sitting on a grassy knoll, Looking out to sea, A little girl passed me by, Then stopped, and turned to me. A bonnet laced with ribbons, Crowned locks of gold so fair, Her dress was of the finest silk, And far beyond compare. Her smile hinted mystery, Her eyes belied her age, Within their depths, I could see, The knowing of a sage. Fresh flowers in her basket, Joined scent of nearby sea, Reminding me of other times, And of another me. She gently placed her dresden hand, Upon my flushing face, 'Twas then I knew, that she had come, From far and distant place. Pictures reeled through my mind, Of the rocky cliffs of Dover, And visions of a little girl, Frolicking in clover. Emotion overcame me, As she looked in to my eyes, Our souls were reunited As I came to realize. I once had been the mother, Of this precious little girl, And in her joy of finding me, She giggled and did twirl. From time of our last parting, Two centuries had passed, But love had spanned, across those years, And forever it would last. I felt a sense of coming home, And as my vision cleared, I reached arms out, to hold her close, And she simply disappeared. Tears were streaming down my cheeks, When I happened to see, The flowers in the basket, She had left there for me. While sitting on a grassy knoll, Looking out to sea, A little girl passed me by, Then stopped, and turned to me. +*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (03-11-2004 09:06 PM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
She gently placed her dresden hand, ==================================== what a great line and image. Lovely writing poetess Linda. Congrats on your milestone post as well. I am sure of my reasons, embracing the seasons, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah dear Linda, How beautiful this is... and how good it feels to have you back with us again. Congrats on your milestone! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
...so touching it sent chills through me.. congratulations on your 16,000 |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
What a beautiful poem to mark your 16,000th post! Congrats Linda & many hugs, Chris Since love grows within you, so beauty grows. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Haunting beautiful!! Your 16,000th post is beautiful Linda. It's good to read you again. believe in what your heart feels... |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Eerily beautiful...well done Linda! Congrats on 16,000! (wow, that's a lot...) ~sky Hold on, if you feel like letting go |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love these ribbons you've tied around the May pole, and the way of this sweet twirl and flutterings. Many hugs, and congratulations, Linda~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
there is so much peace in this.....sigh...lovely dear linda... ~~**~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Linda, your gorgeous milestone made me cry because it is soooooooo beautiful and she'll always be your little girl forever for a love of a mother and daughter is eternal! (big angel hugs) This is so gorgeous and nostalgic, I felt like I was in Ireland again, yay, Congratulations on 16,000, my sweet angel friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
CONGRATS! You are loved! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
aahhh....we're talking about a poet writing about an angel....a self portrait perhaps?....very well done....write me sometime.... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I've this ghost, a man, that just stands there looking at me . . . after several moments, hours it seems, he walks away, is gone. I've often wondered if that could be me looking at me, or is it really someone else. Your wistful piece of childhood relevance, of living memory, brought that to mind. Much enjoyed. jwesley |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
JWES...it's probably that pervert Balladeer...do you keep your curtains closed at night?... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
that little girl you see lives in you and lives in me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel A lovely excellent write. But then what did I expect from an angel. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Ooo, this gave me goosebumps! I think she is part of multi-faceted you, Angel dear. Congrats on the 16,000th! Wow! ~K~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
JM ~ Thank you for your kind words & the "Congrats"! It was nice of you to drop by! Hope all is well in your world! Love & Light, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Nancy ~ You're an absolute dear! ~ and thank you for your lovely announcement post regarding this milestone. You are so thoughtful and caring! Love ya! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
muted ~ Knowing that my poem gave you the "chills" ~ gives them to me as well! I find it very gratifying to have affected a reader in such a manner. Love & Eternal Light, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Chris ~ Merci, mon amie chere! Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
scorpio ~ "Hauntingly beautiful" ~ I like that! Thank you! Love & Light, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
skyshine ~ "eerily beautiful" ~ music to my ears! Thanks, dear one who lights up the sky with her stellar shine! Love & Light, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lori ~ ...even your replies are poetic! Thank you, kind poetess! Love & Light, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lauren ~ It pleases me that you perceived my poem in such a manner! Thank you for saying so! Warm hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah ~ Loved your enthusiastic reply! You bring such energy to everything you write, my friend! Love you, Angel Boy! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dixie ~ That was very sweet of you to say! ~ and the same holds true for you as well! Have a wonderful day! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Toe ~ You managed to make me blush yet again! I need not wear rouge after I read some of your replies! I'll be talking to you soon. Take care ~ and please stay out of trouble! Loves 'n hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
jwesley ~ Ooo! You just gave me the goosebumps! It appears that neither of us is alone! Thank you for your reply which was full of thought! Love & Light, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Toe ~ You are a certifiable ~ and lovable ~ nut bar! Huggums, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
inkedgoddess ~ Yes, I do believe that the little girl is alive and well in both you and I! Love & Inner Light, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T. ~ I curtsey to you for such a wonderful reply! Thank you, sweet sonneteer! Tender hugs & a warm smile, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
K ~ I appreciate your warm response to my poem! ~ and for the "Congrats" on my milestone! Thank you! ~ and wishing you happiness in your new life! Love & Light, EA |
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