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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2004-03-11 06:36 PM



+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+

While sitting on a grassy knoll,
Looking out to sea,
A little girl passed me by,
Then stopped, and turned to me.

A bonnet laced with ribbons,
Crowned locks of gold so fair,
Her dress was of the finest silk,
And far beyond compare.

Her smile hinted mystery,
Her eyes belied her age,
Within their depths, I could see,
The knowing of a sage.

Fresh flowers in her basket,
Joined scent of nearby sea,
Reminding me of other times,
And of another me.

She gently placed her dresden hand,
Upon my flushing face,
'Twas then I knew, that she had come,
From far and distant place.

Pictures reeled through my mind,
Of the rocky cliffs of Dover,
And visions of a little girl,
Frolicking in clover.

Emotion overcame me,
As she looked in to my eyes,
Our souls were reunited
As I came to realize.

I once had been the mother,
Of this precious little girl,
And in her joy of finding me,
She giggled and did twirl.

From time of our last parting,
Two centuries had passed,
But love had spanned, across those years,
And forever it would last.

I felt a sense of coming home,
And as my vision cleared,
I reached arms out, to hold her close,
And she simply disappeared.

Tears were streaming down my cheeks,
When I happened to see,
The flowers in the basket,
She had left there for me.

While sitting on a grassy knoll,
Looking out to sea,
A little girl passed me by,
Then stopped, and turned to me.

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[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (03-11-2004 09:06 PM).]

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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2004-03-11 06:57 PM


She gently placed her dresden hand,
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what a great line and image.
Lovely writing poetess Linda.
Congrats on your milestone post as well.

I am sure of my reasons, embracing the seasons,
and the sacred simplicity of you at my side.

Vienna Teng


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2 posted 2004-03-11 07:12 PM


Ah dear Linda,
How beautiful this is...
and how good it feels to have you back with us again.
Congrats on your milestone!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

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3 posted 2004-03-11 08:29 PM


...so touching it sent chills through me..
congratulations on your 16,000

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4 posted 2004-03-11 09:45 PM


What a beautiful poem to mark your 16,000th post! Congrats Linda & many hugs, Chris

Since love grows within you, so beauty grows.
For love is the beauty of the soul.
                ~St. Augustine



    

scorpio
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5 posted 2004-03-11 09:57 PM


Haunting beautiful!! Your 16,000th post is beautiful Linda.  It's good to read you again.

believe in what your heart feels...

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6 posted 2004-03-11 10:25 PM


Eerily beautiful...well done Linda! Congrats on 16,000! (wow, that's a lot...)

~sky

Hold on, if you feel like letting go
Hold on, it gets better than you know....
~Good Charlotte

BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2004-03-11 10:41 PM


Love these ribbons you've tied around the May pole,
and the way of this sweet twirl and flutterings.

Many hugs, and congratulations,  Linda~  

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8 posted 2004-03-11 10:49 PM


there is so much peace in this.....sigh...lovely dear linda...

~~**~~
Walking with bare feet
among a tapestry of words,
each woven thread, awakening the soul
~~**~~

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9 posted 2004-03-12 12:39 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Linda, your gorgeous milestone made me cry because it is soooooooo beautiful and she'll always be your little girl forever for a love of a mother and daughter is eternal! (big angel hugs) This is so gorgeous and nostalgic, I felt like I was in Ireland again, yay, Congratulations on 16,000, my sweet angel friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

passing shadows
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10 posted 2004-03-12 02:08 AM


CONGRATS! You are loved!
Toerag
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11 posted 2004-03-12 07:14 AM


aahhh....we're talking about a poet writing about an angel....a self portrait perhaps?....very well done....write me sometime....
jwesley
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12 posted 2004-03-12 07:24 AM


I've this ghost, a man, that just stands there looking at me . . . after several moments, hours it seems, he walks away, is gone. I've often wondered if that could be me looking at me, or is it really someone else.  

Your wistful piece of childhood relevance, of living memory, brought that to mind.

Much enjoyed.

jwesley

Toerag
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13 posted 2004-03-12 07:51 AM


JWES...it's probably that pervert Balladeer...do you keep your curtains closed at night?...
inkedgoddess
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14 posted 2004-03-12 08:07 AM


that little girl you see
lives in you and lives in me

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15 posted 2004-03-12 08:46 AM


Earth Angel
A lovely excellent write. But then what did I expect from an angel.



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16 posted 2004-03-12 09:34 AM


Ooo, this gave me goosebumps!  I think she is part of multi-faceted you, Angel dear.
Congrats on the 16,000th!  Wow!  ~K~

Earth Angel
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17 posted 2004-03-13 11:09 AM


JM ~

Thank you for your kind words & the "Congrats"! It was nice of you to drop by! Hope all is well in your world!

Love & Light,
EA

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18 posted 2004-03-13 11:11 AM


Nancy ~

You're an absolute dear! ~ and thank you for your lovely announcement post regarding this milestone. You are so thoughtful and caring!

Love ya!
Linda

Earth Angel
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19 posted 2004-03-13 11:14 AM


muted ~

Knowing that my poem gave you the "chills" ~ gives them to me as well! I find it  very gratifying to have affected a reader in such a manner.

Love & Eternal Light,
EA

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20 posted 2004-03-13 11:15 AM


Chris ~

Merci, mon amie chere!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

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21 posted 2004-03-13 11:16 AM


scorpio ~

"Hauntingly beautiful" ~ I like that! Thank you!

Love & Light,
EA

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22 posted 2004-03-13 11:17 AM


skyshine ~

"eerily beautiful" ~ music to my ears! Thanks, dear one who lights up the sky with her stellar shine!

Love & Light,
EA

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23 posted 2004-03-13 11:18 AM


Lori ~

...even your replies are poetic! Thank you, kind poetess!

Love & Light,
Linda

Earth Angel
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24 posted 2004-03-13 11:20 AM


Lauren ~

It pleases me that you perceived my poem in such a manner! Thank you for saying so!

Warm hugs,
Linda

Earth Angel
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25 posted 2004-03-13 11:21 AM


Noah ~

Loved your enthusiastic reply! You bring such energy to everything you write, my friend!

Love you, Angel Boy!
EA

Earth Angel
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26 posted 2004-03-13 11:22 AM


Dixie ~

That was very sweet of you to say! ~ and the same holds true for you as well!

Have a wonderful day!
Linda

Earth Angel
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27 posted 2004-03-13 11:25 AM


Toe ~

You managed to make me blush yet again! I need not wear rouge after I read some of your replies!

I'll be talking to you soon. Take care ~ and please stay out of trouble!

Loves 'n hugs,
EA

Earth Angel
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28 posted 2004-03-13 11:32 AM


jwesley ~

Ooo! You just gave me the goosebumps! It appears that neither of us is alone! Thank you for your reply which was full of thought!


Love & Light,
EA

Earth Angel
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29 posted 2004-03-13 11:33 AM


Toe ~

You are a certifiable ~ and lovable ~ nut bar!

Huggums,
EA

Earth Angel
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30 posted 2004-03-13 11:34 AM


inkedgoddess ~

Yes, I do believe that the little girl is alive and well in both you and I!

Love & Inner Light,
EA

Earth Angel
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31 posted 2004-03-13 11:36 AM


Mr. T. ~

I curtsey to you for such a wonderful reply! Thank you, sweet sonneteer!

Tender hugs & a warm smile,
EA

Earth Angel
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32 posted 2004-03-13 11:38 AM


K ~

I appreciate your warm response to my poem! ~ and for the "Congrats" on my milestone!

Thank you! ~ and wishing you happiness in your new life!

Love & Light,
EA

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