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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-03-11 05:41 PM


I fumbled
I tumbled
I Emblazoned
I rolled
Head butting reality
And everyone I know

I rolled
Sandy feet
To somewhere I know
That maybe exists

But with what meaning

I found my hawk
On a sheltered beach
On my shoulder

She came
Without anything from me

Stayed with me
Through everything

As our land grew dark
The winds closed
The floods came

We held each other

And I fumbled
I stumbled

I

I

I

I learned


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skyshine
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1 posted 2004-03-11 05:43 PM


Learning makes it worth it....nice work.

~sky

Hold on, if you feel like letting go
Hold on, it gets better than you know....
~Good Charlotte

Grover
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2 posted 2004-03-12 12:09 PM


NICE!
Pilgrimage
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3 posted 2004-03-12 12:10 PM


Oh yeah. This one is GOOD. I saw it and felt it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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4 posted 2004-03-12 01:42 PM


nice
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