Open Poetry #31 |
Id Forbid |
J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
Come with me, barely breathing Into that pitch- black space in your mind Into that core of your being that you dared not find Let us strip each other naked in that dark womb void of any measure or distinction and to the beckoning force let us succumb: two souls yearning to dance in immortal union. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
J.Samm An interesting write. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Laying bare your inner self to another, is even more intimate than baring one's body. I enjoyed your reading your thoughts. Love & Light, EA |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Amazingly beautiful. Nothing is stronger than soul union. Love, Margherita |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Now that would be an intimacy I've never experienced. With the right person, that could be ecstasy without boundary. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very nice |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow....awesome! |
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