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J.Samm
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0 posted 2004-03-11 07:43 AM


Come with me, barely breathing
Into that pitch- black space in your mind
Into that core of your being
that you dared not find

Let us strip each other naked in that dark womb
void of any measure or distinction
and to the beckoning force let us succumb:
two souls yearning to dance in immortal union.

© Copyright 2004 Jasmine Sagge - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-03-11 07:51 AM


J.Samm
An interesting write.

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2004-03-11 08:46 AM


Laying bare your inner self to another, is even more intimate than baring one's body.

I enjoyed your reading your thoughts.

Love & Light,
EA

Margherita
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3 posted 2004-03-11 09:06 AM


Amazingly beautiful. Nothing is stronger than soul union.
Love, Margherita

Pilgrimage
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4 posted 2004-03-11 09:59 AM


Now that would be an intimacy I've never experienced. With the right person, that could be ecstasy without boundary.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Grover
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5 posted 2004-03-11 11:05 AM


Very nice
passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-03-11 12:40 PM


wow....awesome!
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